What an image!

You took this structure/style to the next level. Following one thought to the next, I became more and more entrenched in the story. I didn't want it to end.

Such inspiring metaphors - I'm having a blast imagining them, and also am feeling them in their grays at the same time. 'All I want is to live a soft life' is such a brilliant, evocative line. Wonderfully done.