Debdutta Pal
Jun 24, 2024

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The way you presented this poem, numbering, formatting, and punctuation, made the f-e-e-l the oscillating states.

Trance is the perfect title. Beyond perfect. I'm in a simulated one right now. In the best way possible.

You're right, we should write more about mental health.

And vulnerably, unabashedly so.

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Debdutta Pal
Debdutta Pal

Written by Debdutta Pal

I'd rather be watching Netflix.

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