Debdutta Pal
Sep 9, 2023

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I could visualise it, the sign, the shovel and the scowl. I am surprised by the amount of detail you captured in this short story and I was building up more in my head.

Didn't see the ending coming, sad, but I agree it's a nice way to go. In fiction, I've thought of prison as freeing too. Because other endings would be chaos.

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Debdutta Pal
Debdutta Pal

Written by Debdutta Pal

I'd rather be watching Netflix.

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